...and it's writing.
A tipsy discussion of writing craft. Writers D.C. McNaughton and Avery Ames imbibe a few drinks while they review and revise their old (and often cringey) writing. Each episode focuses on a particular aspect of craft and features a themed cocktail pairing.
Episodes
Monday Nov 15, 2021
Ep 013: ”Dialogue Tags and Action Beats,” he exclaimed!
Monday Nov 15, 2021
Monday Nov 15, 2021
DC and Avery discuss whether "said is dead" or "said is invisible", the use of outlandish dialogue tags, and how action beats can break up repetitive dialogue. Featuring an excerpt from one of Avery's very oldest writing samples.
Monday Nov 08, 2021
Ep012: Mini-Episode: Planning Tools
Monday Nov 08, 2021
Monday Nov 08, 2021
Planning a novel is hard. Today we talk about some of the tools and processes we use to get started.
Monday Nov 01, 2021
Ep 011: Scary Queries
Monday Nov 01, 2021
Monday Nov 01, 2021
In our first Halloween episode, we talk about the horror of queries! We chat a little about the query experience, and go over some key dos and don'ts when crafting your query letter. We also revise a spooooky query about a star-crossed ghost and the real estate agent trying to sell his haunted house.
Monday Oct 18, 2021
Ep 010: Pitch, Please
Monday Oct 18, 2021
Monday Oct 18, 2021
In this episode, DC and Avery discuss best practices for pitching your work, both online and in-person, as well as thoughts on pitch events in general. How to find your story's hook and show it off as sparkly as it can be. We also take a look at a few of Avery's pitches and break down some common pitch mistakes.
Monday Oct 04, 2021
Ep 009: Short Fiction with Crystal L.Kirkham
Monday Oct 04, 2021
Monday Oct 04, 2021
In this episode, Avery interviews author Crystal L. Kirkham about everything short fiction, from drabbles to flash fiction to novellas.
Sunday Sep 19, 2021
Ep 008: Love & Hate: Passion vs Obligation
Sunday Sep 19, 2021
Sunday Sep 19, 2021
Today, D.C. and Avery discuss the love and hate aspect of writing. How do you keep the passion alive when your love for a story starts to wane? And when it comes to deadlines, how do you trudge through the parts of the process you hate in order to meet them?
Monday Sep 06, 2021
Ep 007: Dos and Don‘ts of First Present
Monday Sep 06, 2021
Monday Sep 06, 2021
First-person Present Tense is often hated, but why? In this episode we chat about the reasons many dislike it, but also the ways it can be useful. We share excerpts from our writing that illustrate possible ways to tackle some common pitfalls of this tense/POV combo, as well.
CORRECTION: Toward the end of the podcast while discussing Howl's Moving Castle, Avery incorrectly refers to Sophie as the middle child instead of the eldest. Sorry, that drink was a strong one, whoops.
Monday Aug 09, 2021
Ep 006: Was-ing the Was-es Part 2
Monday Aug 09, 2021
Monday Aug 09, 2021
It's aliiiive! In this episode, we discuss how to bring your stale, lifeless writing back from the dead by swapping out the verb "was" for more varied phrasing, and embellish this week's writing snippet with silliness.
Monday Jul 26, 2021
Ep 005: Was-ing the Was-es Part 1
Monday Jul 26, 2021
Monday Jul 26, 2021
Let's get rid of some was-es! In this episode, the task of revising passive voice drives both D.C. and Avery to their editing limits (while sharing a good laugh).So what is Passive Voice, exactly? When is it bad, and (hot take) when is it sometimes a GOOD thing? We polish up a sample of Avery's old writing on-air to demonstrate.
Sunday Jul 11, 2021
Ep 004: My Kingdom for a Critique Partner
Sunday Jul 11, 2021
Sunday Jul 11, 2021
Everyone says you need betas and Critique Partners, but finding them sometimes feels like the proverbial needle in a haystack. So where can you actually track them down? Join us for a conversation about critique partners and betas -- the good, the bad, and the ugly.
Now featuring Avery's hot new single: "The Technical Issues Song" (Comcast Remix)